Lettera in inglese

[Hebckoe]

Originariamente inviato da -dieguz-

in ogni caso resta il


"fucking live concert"


che da una certa classe alla lettera

esatto!
la lettera deve ruotare intorno a questo!

[Jo3]

Originariamente inviato da Pisu87

Meglio riscriverla che modificarla

Ho un paio di dubbi qui e li, andrebbe rifatta da zero per un risultato migliore

Per il if you're going to be here I'm going to be happy, avevo dei dubbi su come modificare l'originale quindi ho fatto che riscrivere la frase. Il tutto è comunque migliorabile.

if you are planning to stay here, i surely be happy.

[Jo3]

The problem is going to be dealt with publicly and the movie "I Cento Passi" is going to be projected to remember Peppino Impastato. It's going to be a funny week with a lot of punk music and so many people, if you're going to be here I'm going to be happy. Please let me know about this as soon as possible, I'm waiting for your reply, best regards.

Ma perche' il futuro prossimo?

Cristo e' un disastro.

I think it surely will be a funny week with a lot of punk music. (punto) lot of people will join this event (punto). I'm very happy if you choose to stay with us this summer (o la settimana /mese/stagione che sara') (punto).
Let me know about your project as soon as possible. (punto).

See you soon.

Sincerely yours,

(Firma)


(Sinceramente pero' io la riscriverei tutta. anche perche' non si capisce cosa voglia comunicare tuo fratello.

[Jo3]

Forse cosi e meglio (riscritta ex novo, con un tema completamente diverso)


Dear Andrew,

I'm really happy that our teachers gave us the chance to know each other. I've always desired to have a new pen-pal from England. Anyway, now I think I should introduce myself: my name is X and I'm X years old. I live in X, a big town placed in the middle of Italy. I love my hometown very much. Do you like yours? You know, I would really love to visit England, someday. Maybe we will also meet, who knows.
My family consists of four persons: my father, my mother, my little sister and me. My father is an engineer, my mother is a housewife and my younger sister attends the elementary school. I love my family very much. What about you? How many people does your family consist of?
I'm attending the "A.V." Middle School. Which school are you attending? And by the way, do you like going to school? Well, I do, because I get to know a lot of interesting things and to talk to my friends. And tell me, what are your favourite subjects? Mine are english and science. And after having done your homework, what do you do in your spare time? As for me, I love playing with my computer, listening to music and playing the violin. Do you have any pets? I've a little playful cat, his name is Olof.

[pgp]

Originariamente inviato da Ja]{|e

Dear Pietro, how are you? I'm fine. I'm in Castellammare to relax (non è riflessivo) someday. I would like you to come here for the next week, I with my punk band will have (non si usa to!) a fucking (è da pazzi) live concert in Villa Margherita, you know? It's a park with some kind of flowers.
I'm looking forward to playing (quest'espressione vuole il gerundio) my guitar in front of thousand people, I hope that people will jump with my music all night long. In Castellammare there is, in this days, a demonstration against the mafia, there will be a discussion about the problem and the prosection of the film "I Cento Passi" to remember Peppino Impastato.
It will be a funny week, with punk music and so many people, I would be happy if you were (2° periodo ipotetico) here.
Please let us know as soon as possible, waiting for your reply, best regards

Abbastanza scandalosa come lettera, l'ho corretta dal punto di vista grammaticale, ma imho appare comunque un po' spoglia e banale. Comunque questi sono errori inammissibili anche per uno studente di liceo.

Potrei aver dimenticato qualcosa.


pgp

[dasdsasderterowaa]

Ma non poteva scrivere la classica letterina a Babbo Natale? cos¡ se la trovava pure pronta per questo Natale.

[Pisu87]

Originariamente inviato da Jo3

Ma perche' il futuro prossimo?

Perchè ci sta bene.

Originariamente inviato da Jo3

Cristo e' un disastro.

La mia? Non sei nella posizione di criticare la mia lettera.

[Jo3]

Originariamente inviato da Pisu87

Perchè ci sta bene.



La mia? Non sei nella posizione di criticare la mia lettera.

Dici?

Edit : my fault, ho errato a quotare riportando in italianizzato un altro post.

Criticavo la lettera originale.

[dasdsasderterowaa]

Pisu87, ma sei il fratello di Jackie?

[Ja]{|e]

Originariamente inviato da Cloudis

Pisu87, ma sei il fratello di Jackie?

"Città: Chivasso (TO)"

Non credo proprio

[dasdsasderterowaa]

Originariamente inviato da Ja]{|e

"Città: Chivasso (TO)"

Non credo proprio

Capito, beh, magari aveva indicato la città dove ora risiede, per l'uni ad esempio.

Comunque mi sono lasciato ingannare dal post di Jo3, che avevo scritto - rivolgendosi a Pisu87 - "tua sorella l'ha fatto per te."

[-dieguz-]

Originariamente inviato da Hebckoe

esatto!
la lettera deve ruotare intorno a questo!

beh, allora se la mettiamo sotto questo punto di vista, mancano tutti i

"maddaffacca spittycash, yo yo bro, gangsta, gonna fuck..." di rito

[pgp]

Originariamente inviato da Mini4wdking

Togliendo errori gravi (non tutti) ne introduci altri gravi.

Dear Pietro, how are you? I'm fine. I have been (si usa il present perfect) vero for some days in Castellammare to relax. I would like you to come here (togli for) giusto, infatti ho scritto "potrei aver dimenticato qualcosa" the next week, Me (e non I) se è soggetto non ci vuole I? with my punk band will have a fucking live concert in Villa Margherita, do you know it ho sentito diverse volte persone inglesi che al termine di una frase aggiungono "you know?"? It's a park with some kind of flowers.
I'm looking forward to play "to playing quest'espressione vuole il gerundio" CAVOLO, SE METTI IL GERUNDIO TOGLI IL TOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! ALTRIMENTI ANDAVA BENE PRIMA ed in fatti è più usata "I'm looking forward to play") sbagliato. To look forward è una delle poche espressioni (o forse l'unica? Non ricordo) che devono essere seguite da to + verbo in -ing. my guitar in front of thousands of (people in inglese è plurale) people, I hope they (togli people) will jump with my music all night long. In Castellammare there is, in this days, a demonstration against the mafia, there will be a discussion about the problem and the screening of the movie ACCIDENTI, "FILM" IN INGLESE VUOL DIRE STRETTAMENTE "PELLICOLA", pezzo di plastica... io sapevo che in america fosse utilizzato movie, mentre in inghilterra venisse usato film "I Cento Passi" to remember Peppino Impastato.
It will be a funny week, with punk music and so many people, I would be happy if you were here.
Please let us know as soon as possible, I'm waiting for your reply, best regards

Ciao, e non ti agitare


pgp

[Ja]{|e]

Ecco la seconda perla, questa volta è la descrizione della famiglia

Dear Carlo,
can I speack of ( ) my family? My family is composed by five person, my father, my mother, my sisters Ilenia and Fabiana, and me.
My father was born in C/mare in 1950 and he is a doctor since 1978. He is a calm and intelligent man.
Also my mother was born in C/mare in 1950, she worked in Buseto Palizzolo and Oderzo (tralasciamo il fatto che ad Oderzo - Veneto - ha lavorato millemiliardi di anni fa, e a Buseto solo il primo anno in cui siamo stati in Sicilia....). She is a italian theacher ( ). Now she work in c/mare to Pascoli school.
Then there is my sister Fabiana. the oldest of us. She was born in Treviso, north Italy, in 1978. She is bachelor in medicine and she works and live in Trieste from a year. She live with his ( ) boyfriend Claudio, a crazy man ( mia sorella vive con uno psicopatico ed io non lo sapevo).
My sister Ilenia is that with whick I speack ( ) more. She was born in Motta di Livenza, in 1983. Now she study ........................ at the Palermo university. It's ( sono un'animale domestico) a friendly girl, he ( anche un uomo) know more things (ma ha una grande stima nei miei confronti ). She like waching film more. Now I introduse my-self. I was born in Veneto in 1987. When I was 5, all my family went to Castellammare. I study History of the Music in Palermo university. My favourites hobbies is listen and made Punk music, travel with my motorbike and go out mith my friends (insomma, cazzeggio totale, e si vede ). I love my city but I hate people that live in.

[manurosso87]

Originariamente inviato da Ja]{|e

Ecco la seconda perla, questa volta è la descrizione della famiglia

Dear Carlo,
can I speack of ( ) my family? My family is composed by five person, my father, my mother, my sisters Ilenia and Fabiana, and me.
My father was born in C/mare in 1950 and he is a doctor since 1978. He is a calm and intelligent man.
Also my mother was born in C/mare in 1950, she worked in Buseto Palizzolo and Oderzo (tralasciamo il fatto che ad Oderzo - Veneto - ha lavorato millemiliardi di anni fa, e a Buseto solo il primo anno in cui siamo stati in Sicilia....). She is a italian theacher ( ). Now she work in c/mare to Pascoli school.
Then there is my sister Fabiana. the oldest of us. She was born in Treviso, north Italy, in 1978. She is bachelor in medicine and she works and live in Trieste from a year. She live with his ( ) boyfriend Claudio, a crazy man ( mia sorella vive con uno psicopatico ed io non lo sapevo).
My sister Ilenia is that with whick I speack ( ) more. She was born in Motta di Livenza, in 1983. Now she study ........................ at the Palermo university. It's ( sono un'animale domestico) a friendly girl, he ( anche un uomo) know more things (ma ha una grande stima nei miei confronti ). She like waching film more. Now I introduse my-self. I was born in Veneto in 1987. When I was 5, all my family went to Castellammare. I study History of the Music in Palermo university. My favourites hobbies is listen and made Punk music, travel with my motorbike and go out mith my friends (insomma, cazzeggio totale, e si vede ). I love my city but I hate people that live in.

sappi che ti sono vicino!

[-dieguz-]

Originariamente inviato da Ja]{|e

Ecco la seconda perla, questa volta è la descrizione della famiglia

Dear Carlo,
can I speack of ( ) my family? My family is composed by five person, my father, my mother, my sisters Ilenia and Fabiana, and me.
My father was born in C/mare in 1950 and he is a doctor since 1978. He is a calm and intelligent man.
Also my mother was born in C/mare in 1950, she worked in Buseto Palizzolo and Oderzo (tralasciamo il fatto che ad Oderzo - Veneto - ha lavorato millemiliardi di anni fa, e a Buseto solo il primo anno in cui siamo stati in Sicilia....). She is a italian theacher ( ). Now she work in c/mare to Pascoli school.
Then there is my sister Fabiana. the oldest of us. She was born in Treviso, north Italy, in 1978. She is bachelor in medicine and she works and live in Trieste from a year. She live with his ( ) boyfriend Claudio, a crazy man ( mia sorella vive con uno psicopatico ed io non lo sapevo).
My sister Ilenia is that with whick I speack ( ) more. She was born in Motta di Livenza, in 1983. Now she study ........................ at the Palermo university. It's ( sono un'animale domestico) a friendly girl, he ( anche un uomo) know more things (ma ha una grande stima nei miei confronti ). She like waching film more. Now I introduse my-self. I was born in Veneto in 1987. When I was 5, all my family went to Castellammare. I study History of the Music in Palermo university. My favourites hobbies is listen and made Punk music, travel with my motorbike and go out mith my friends (insomma, cazzeggio totale, e si vede ). I love my city but I hate people that live in.

sempre megliooooo

[dasdsasderterowaa]

Originariamente inviato da Ja]{|e

Ecco la seconda perla, questa volta è la descrizione della famiglia

Dear Carlo,
can I speack of ( ) my family? My family is composed by five person, my father, my mother, my sisters Ilenia and Fabiana, and me.
My father was born in C/mare in 1950 and he is a doctor since 1978. He is a calm and intelligent man.
Also my mother was born in C/mare in 1950, she worked in Buseto Palizzolo and Oderzo (tralasciamo il fatto che ad Oderzo - Veneto - ha lavorato millemiliardi di anni fa, e a Buseto solo il primo anno in cui siamo stati in Sicilia....). She is a italian theacher ( ). Now she work in c/mare to Pascoli school.
Then there is my sister Fabiana. the oldest of us. She was born in Treviso, north Italy, in 1978. She is bachelor in medicine and she works and live in Trieste from a year. She live with his ( ) boyfriend Claudio, a crazy man ( mia sorella vive con uno psicopatico ed io non lo sapevo).
My sister Ilenia is that with whick I speack ( ) more. She was born in Motta di Livenza, in 1983. Now she study ........................ at the Palermo university. It's ( sono un'animale domestico) a friendly girl, he ( anche un uomo) know more things (ma ha una grande stima nei miei confronti ). She like waching film more. Now I introduse my-self. I was born in Veneto in 1987. When I was 5, all my family went to Castellammare. I study History of the Music in Palermo university. My favourites hobbies is listen and made Punk music, travel with my motorbike and go out mith my friends (insomma, cazzeggio totale, e si vede ). I love my city but I hate people that live in.

Perché hai censurato cosa studi quando poi hai diffuso informazioni personali su tutta la famiglia...

[Ja]{|e]

Originariamente inviato da Cloudis

Perché hai censurato cosa studi quando poi hai diffuso informazioni personali su tutta la famiglia...

Non ho censurato, è mio fratello che non sa come si dice ingegneria informatica

[dasdsasderterowaa]

Originariamente inviato da Ja]{|e

Non ho censurato, è mio fratello che non sa come si dice ingegneria informatica

Ah, meglio ancora...

[-dieguz-]

Originariamente inviato da Cloudis

Ah, meglio ancora...