Enquiry letter

[marcorag]

Ciao,
che ne pensate di qst lettera?
qlk errore evidente o potrebbe andare? dev consegnarla domani

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Dear sirs,

With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's Economist, we are currently looking for manufacturers, exporters or suppliers of electrical products in London area. Our requirements are high-quality components and fast technical support.

We are manufacturers of audio, video, communications, and information technology products for the consumer and professional markets. As we are planning to increase the capacity of our fabrication facilities in England, we are looking for local distributors who can provide quality electrical material for our new research laboratories. We are interested in lighting products, power supply units, transformers and converters. Essential condition are the electrical systems safety standards for the employee workplaces.
We are looking to start with samples in small quantities and go up from there.

Could you please send us your latest catalogue and price list, including detailed product datasheets. Would you kindly advise us of your terms of payment, any quantity discount available and details about transport and delivery.
I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully


Grazie

[Espinado]

non è malaccio, c'è qualche s di troppo o di troppo poco in giro e qualche parola nn molto inglese, ma alla fine la comunicazione è chiara. penso nell'ultima frase visto che sono interrogative indirette vadano riscritte come tali e non come interrogative senza "?"

[marcorag]

Originariamente inviato da marcorag

Dear sirs,

With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's Economist, we are currently looking for manufacturers, exporters or suppliers of electrical products in the London area. Our requirements are high-quality components and fast technical support.

We are manufacturers of audio, video, communications, and information technology products for the consumer and professional markets. As we are planning to increase the capacity of our fabrication facilities in England, we are looking for local distributor who can provide quality electrical material for our new research laboratories. We are interested in lighting products, power supply units, transformers and converters. Essential condition are the electrical systems safety standards for the employee workplaces.
We are looking to start with samples in small quantities and go up from there.

We would be grateful if you would send us a copy of your latest catalogue and price list, including detailed products datasheets. Please advise us of your terms of payment, any quantity discount available and details about transport and delivery.

We look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,


Grazie

grazie, sei sempre gentile e disponibile

Nn riesco a capire se qst frase va bene (è un po forzata dall'italiano)
standard va messo in singolare o plurale'

Essential condition are the electrical systems safety standards for the employee workplaces.

[Espinado]

beh direi che è indifferente, l's ci vuole di sicuro con condition

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local distributors that can provide quality electrical material for our new research laboratories.

We would be grateful if you could send us


cmq non preoccuparti, saranno sconvolti dalla qualità del tuo inglese visto il livello medio delle pmi italiane