Men and women will never be equal, they are too different...

[diafino]

Questa è la versione già modificata..

If men and women are equal, why have male been the dominant sex throughout history? This is something that has only been discovered in the last 50 years when scientific research began to investigate the differences between the male and the female brain, by using the cat scan. The brain of an embryo at about 6 weeks is shaped as either male or female. It is at this point that the male fetus begins to produce hormones that organize the brain’s neural network into a male pattern. Without these hormones the brain would be female.
The structural and organizational differences between the male and female brains demonstrate how these differences make men more aggressive, competitive and better when spatial ability and women more sensitive to the nuances of expression and gesture, more adept at judging character and more people-oriented.
Physically men and women are different.
The stereotype of male is a person who is stronger, bigger and more energetic than a woman, who is smaller and more delicate.
In legal terms, men and women are equal. Gender of discrimination in education and job advertisements is rare. That ensures that opportunities are available to both men and women. However, there might be still job advertisements that particularly require applicants to be of a particular gender.
Sometimes legal and equal opportunities policies have helped people of a certain gender to get jobs that have been traditionally associated with opposite sexual connotations. For example, male nurses may be considered “effeminate” and female fire fighter “butch”: there are cultural beliefs that may dissuade people from applying to certain positions.
This reveals the need to conform to society’s notion of femininity and masculinity, and the ensuing notions of what it is to “be a man” or “be a woman” still dictate what is “man’s work” and what is “women’s work”.
In the world of paid, full-time employment, it is said that men have more opportunities than women and are more likely to be chosen for jobs because of the possibility that the women will leave if they have children.
In addition to this, it is said that childcare and domestic tasks undertaken by couples are mainly done by women, therefore showing the unequal division of domestic labour, and the continuing inequality between men and women.
This is due to the traditional expectation of society that considers childcare, housework and shopping as women’s work rather than man’s, and on the basis of this consideration, man and women can never be equal. Until men equally share the childcare and domestic tasks with women, there will be no social equality between the sexes.



cosa ne pensate della mia composition? ci sono degli errori?

Ah simenticavo..mi hanno detto che è necessaria la divisione in paragrafi..ma io come lo divido? c'è una regola logica o no..

grazie 1000 a chi mi darà una mano..

[wicked]

un pochino....

[diafino]

Originariamente inviato da wicked
un pochino....

ci sono degli errori ? azz io ce l'ho messa tutta ma tu vedo che sei del posto quindi

[wicked]

If men and women are equal, why have male been the dominant sex throughout history? This is something that has only been discovered in the last 50 years when scientific research began to investigate the differences between the male and the female brain, by using the cat scan. The brain of an embryo at about 6 weeks is shaped as either male or female. It is at this point that the male fetus begins to produce hormones that organize the brain?s neural network into a male pattern. Without these hormones the brain would be female.
The structural and organizational differences between the male and female brains demonstrate how these differences make men more aggressive, competitive and better when spatial ability and mathematical reasoning are required, and women more sensitive to the nuances of expression and gesture, more adept at judging character and more people-oriented (FRASE TROPPO LUNGA).
Physically men and women are different.
The stereotype of male is a person who is stronger, bigger and more energetic than a woman, who is smaller and more delicate.
In legal terms, men and women are equal. Gender of discrimination in education and job advertisements is rare. That ensures that opportunities are available to both men and women. However, there might be still job advertisements that particularly require applicants to be of a particular gender.
Sometimes there are people who through legal and equal opportunity polices have embarked upon jobs that contrast with the traditional notions of masculinity or femininity (STA FRASE NON SI CAPISCE BENE, COSA VUOI DIRE?). For example,male nurses may be considered ?effeminate? and female fire fighter ?butch?: there are cultural beliefs that may dissuade people from applying to certain positions.
This reveals the need to conform to society?s notion of femininity and masculinity, and the ensuing notions of what it is to ?be a man? or ?be a woman? still dictate what is ?man?s work? and what is ?women?s work?.
In the world of paid, full-time employment, it is said that men have more opportunities than women and are more likely to be chosen for jobs because of the possibility that the women will leave if they have children.
In addition to this, it is said that childcare and domestic tasks undertaken by couples are mainly done by women, therefore showing the unequal division of domestic labour, and the continuing inequality between men and women.
This is due to the traditional expectation of society that considers childcare, housework and shopping as women?s work rather than man?s, and on the basis of this consideration, man and women can never be equal. Until men equally share the childcare and domestic tasks with women, there will be no social equality between the sexes.

HO FATTO QCHE MODIFICA, MA OGGI HO IL CERVELLO FRITTO, DIMMI COME TI SEMBRA

[diafino]

Ottimo..ho visto qualche bella modifica che ha reso qualche frase più semplice..cmq..la frase lunga l'ho accorciata togliendo delle parti in mod da renderla legibile mentre con la frase:

"Sometimes there are people who through legal and equal opportunity polices have embarked upon jobs that contrast with the traditional notions of masculinity or femininity"

intendo dire che a volte ci sono persone che sono andati contro il nostro concetto di lavoro da uomini sfruttando questa tanto sventolata parità..

[wicked]

Forse è meglio così (MIO PARERE PERSONALE, POI FAI TU )

Sometimes legal and equal opportunities policies have helped people of a certain gender to get jobs that have been traditionally associated with opposite sexual connotations.

HA SENSO? IO LA CAPISCO COSì...

[diafino]

Originariamente inviato da wicked
Forse è meglio così (MIO PARERE PERSONALE, POI FAI TU )

Sometimes legal and equal opportunities policies have helped people of a certain gender to get jobs that have been traditionally associated with opposite sexual connotations.

HA SENSO? IO LA CAPISCO COSì...

PERFETTA

[Dr. Death]

Originariamente inviato da diafino
If men and women are equal, why have males been the dominant sex virtually throughout history? This is something that has only been discovered in the last 50 years when scientific research began investigating differences between the male and the female brain using the cat scan. A six-week old embryo brain is shaped as either male or female. It is at this point that the male fetus begins producing hormones that organize the brain’s neural network into a male pattern while the brain will be female in their absence.
Structural and organizational differences between the male and female brains, demonstrate how these differences make men more aggressive, competitive and perform better than womenwhen spatial ability and mathematical reasoning are required, and women more sensitive to the nuances of expression and gesture, more adept at judging character and more people-oriented than men.
Men and women are physically different.
Our stereotype of a male is a person stronger, bigger and more energetic than a woman who is smaller and more delicate.
Women enjoy equal opportunities and property rights with men with no discrimination in education or job advertisements. However I think there might still be job advertisements that especially require an applicant to be of a particular gender.
People sometimes have embarked upon jobs that conflict with the traditional notions of masculinity or femininity through legal and equal opportunity policies. For example, male nurses may be considered “effeminate” and female fire fighter “butch”: there are cultural beliefs that may dissuade people from accessing some employments.
This unhides the pressure to conform to society’s notion of femininity and masculinity, and the ensuing notions of what “be a man” and “be a woman” mean, and still dictate what can be a male or female job
In the world of paid, full-time work, they say men have more opportunities than women and have more chance in being chosen for jobs that women can't mantain during motherhood
Plus, childcare and domestic tasks undertaken by couples are done mainly by women, therefore showing the unequal division of domestic labour, and the continuing inequality between men and women.
This is due to the traditional expectation of society that indicate childcare, housework and shopping as women’s work rather than man’s, and with this view in place, man and women can never be equal until an equal share of the childcare and domestic tasks will be made by both men and women

[diafino]

wow wow wow ieri sera alle 2 di notte a copiare il tema!!!

[Dr. Death]

Originariamente inviato da diafino
wow wow wow ieri sera alle 2 di notte a copiare il tema!!!

Se vuoi te la traduco anche in finlandese

[porny]

435 parole? ma non sono un po' troppe?

[diafino]

Originariamente inviato da porny
435 parole? ma non sono un po' troppe?

ROTFL

[diafino]

Originariamente inviato da Dr. Death
Se vuoi te la traduco anche in finlandese

no no..cmq grazie 1000 poi ti dirò come è andato..