Canzone o poesia

[y4k]

Secondo voi, questo testo potrebbe diventare una canzone o una poesia..?
Across the point of the boot
She saw the forbidden
At midnight, during a day before the rebirth
The first one
She saw black monks in white and
And the octagon now has been all surrounded by the dark
Between bushes the red moon, all frightened
Yeah, the red moon had a some kind of fear
But the brave Elohim without any fear
Like a snake
She saw them acting for the dark
From the bushes, now lets go in the streets
There, it was a windy day but it doesn’t matter
Sometimes when you feels better, there is a kind of magic and
Nothings care you,
There could be cold
There could be snow
There could be wind
But when you feels better, specially with two roses the rest is futile
And that day you see…
It was a day before the birth when I saw my Elohim.
With only a smile she makes me feel better, this is magic oh yeah!
Back in the present, the brave angel showed me the past in the future and the future in the past
What was that?
It was only a dream
For three times, just a dream.

[bananarama]

un canzone si, una poesia... sono un po' dubbioso

[Haden80]

Originariamente inviato da bananarama

un canzone si, una poesia... sono un po' dubbioso

anche secondo me..
frasi troppo lunghe per essere una poesia...