URGENTE!

[Come Folgore dal cielo]

Originariamente inviato da nighthc

there was a nice cat
black and white,so fat..

so i can't go on with that shit
better i throw myself down in a pit

ever known i'm a noob
coz of that fuckin poems
i'll get a big cock without lube

my teacher 24/7 prays
asking god to give me a brain.
i still writing like she says
but i feel only anal pain.



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direi che ci siamo no?

[Palladio]

Originariamente inviato da juninho85

dici?

yes

[juninho85]

Originariamente inviato da Palladio

yes

[^TiGeRShArK^]

Originariamente inviato da Alrisha

E poi perchè mai anal pain? Come scrivi scusa?

immagino dipenda da "i'll get a big cock without lube"
magari è meglio se non leggi certe sconcerie in inglese...

[nighthc]

Originariamente inviato da ^TiGeRShArK^

sconcerie in inglese

mai sentito parlare di licenza poetica?

[^TiGeRShArK^]

there was a white cat down in the road,
that suddenly started to run seeing a toad
the jumping big frog was light green
eager to find a place where to swim

the cat then stepped aside to observe it
the strange creature he was unwilling to meet
trying to understand what to do
he hide after a bush to see through


il mio contributo (ABAB)

[^TiGeRShArK^]

Originariamente inviato da nighthc

mai sentito parlare di licenza poetica?

si.. e la licenza per scrivere sul forum cose VM 18 in ingelse ce l'hai anke?

[ooooooooooooooo]

Originariamente inviato da ^TiGeRShArK^

there was a white cat down in the road,
that suddenly started to run seeing a toad
the jumping big frog was light green
eager to find a place where to swim

the cat then stepped aside to observe it
the strange creature he was unwilling to meet
trying to understand what to do
he hide after a bush to see through


il mio contributo (ABAB)

grazie mille grazie a te son riuscito a finirla!(le rime xò le ho lasciate aabb,scusate ma l'inizio mi piaceva)
sentite qua:

there was a nice cat
black and white,so fat
he travels around the city
looking for pity

the pity of someone
who gives him a fishbone
after the meal he goes to bed
and in the oscurity of the night there wasn't a led

so a man who walking on the street
to the poor cat gives a kick
than the cat stepped aside to observe it
the strange creature he was unwilling to meet

trying to understand what to do
he hide after a bush to see trough
the man sit down on the floor
than the cat thinks: he maybe very poor!






fa cagare lo so..ma mejo de cosi non vieneeee!!

grazie a tutti..ora mi aspetta petrarca!

[Alrisha]

Originariamente inviato da ^TiGeRShArK^

si.. e la licenza per scrivere sul forum cose VM 18 in ingelse ce l'hai anke?

E va beh... Manca poco...
Ha dato anche nighthc il suo contributo!
Ha fatto anche delle rime giuste!

Buon Petrarca!